SF - Audition

Oh. My. God.

So many mistakes ;n;
So many unfinished sketchy things ;n;
So many horribly written lines ;n;
Nuuuuuu

But I finished and I'm proud of the Dercas face image, so at least I can have a chance at getting to round one xD

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The text at the top reads:
"It seems that we all want something in life: material success, acceptance, adventure, health, money.
But what happens when we get a chance to attain our wish? How far will we go? What is the price for our happiness?"